Your gaze pleads
Upon the ancient ruins of my heart
A painful wound
That says
I will be a remedy for your wounds
Your gaze
Is a heavy wave
Upon the rocky shore of my waiting
That screams
The sound of a meeting breaking
A small shell
While amidst the terror of your presence
Breathes in the stories
Whispering in my ear
That the sea
Tomorrow
Is calm
Critics
English Critical Description (One Paragraph): In the poem "Shore of Waiting," Hirbod Human, an Iranian-American poet, filmmaker, and philosopher, explores the deep pain and wounds of his heart while awaiting the encounter of love. With a serene tone and beautiful imagery, he portrays the voice of the sea and the whispers of small shells amidst fear and anticipation, expressing that the sea will gently wave in a tomorrow where calmness and peace will return to hearts.
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